I think what may be throwing you off, is that for children the heads are a smidge too big? and the girl on the left has a very Mature face. You could soften it by not having the cheekbones so apparent and maybe reduce the eye size just a bit. PS can be used to select the head and certain elements of it to resize it, other than that the colors are great, and wonderful job
I'm glad you seem to like the family drawings i've done!! Not too many people care for them as they are more personal. Here is a couple more Family Drawings > [link] <> [link] < Thanks!!
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