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Family Portraits

I'm not 100% happy with the girl on the left. Help me figure this out

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=FTSArts Jun 6, 2013  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think what may be throwing you off, is that for children the heads are a smidge too big? and the girl on the left has a very Mature face. You could soften it by not having the cheekbones so apparent and maybe reduce the eye size just a bit. PS can be used to select the head and certain elements of it to resize it, other than that the colors are great, and wonderful job :)
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*Kalmek182 Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :)
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=FTSArts Jun 6, 2013  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome :) Hope it helped :P
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=ladycompassion Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how precious this one is too.....:iconloveredplz:
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*Kalmek182 Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad you seem to like the family drawings i've done!! :D Not too many people care for them as they are more personal. Here is a couple more Family Drawings :)> [link] <> [link] < :D Thanks!!
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~J1Star Jan 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Methinks the eyes, nose and mouth are a tad too big with the face on the left. Might be fixable with PS or the like. :) Lovely rendering of the folds.
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*Kalmek182 Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks, I appreciate it. Do you also do think maybe the head it self is a tad big??
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~J1Star Jan 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Children's heads are usually bigger in proportion compared to adults so no, I think the size of the head is alright :)
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*Kalmek182 Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks!
yay, for you help!
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~J1Star Jan 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
No problem, glad to be of help! :)
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